Today has been one of those days with my time and memory project.

Things that I need to develop/improve on.

1. The composition of the images.

They give the impression of a country magazine fashion shoot. Not what I wanted at all.

2. Clothing, maybe consider a boiler suit and a head scarf?

So that they audience get a feeling of the working women.

3. Need to make these images less intermit.

Bring the character away from the close up shots of what is happening, allowing space. We don't need to see everything close up!

4. NEW IDEA

Maybe consider having the character social smoking, eating lunch (apple) and generally chilling.

Im still positive about this project idea and I wish to continue it, but I have just reached a point where I am like, oh :S